CHAPTER 2
WALLS
OF MEMORIES
Last
thing Rakka saw was Asuman jumping down from wagon and crouching under it in
time. Then the herd flooded over it. Trees shuddered.
In midst
of thudding, honking; he could clearly make out the cracking sound of wood. The
wagon had smashed.
Hundreds
of antelopes headed south leaving a great cloud of dust behind their trail.
“I can’t
bear it more,” said the old-hunter. The rope slipped from his grip rupturing
flesh of his hand. The cage swayed, Neytri grunted and everyone’s grip
loosened. With a great thud, iron cage collapsed and vanished in dusty cloud.
“Bloody
hell!”
Rakka
studied the thick blanket of suspending dust below. Somewhere under the
wreckage of wagon his chief was fighting to remain alive or he might have
already lost the gamble of life. Rakka looked at his companions with worried
eyes, seeking guidance for next move. All he received back was their scared
stares.
“No,”
warned the old-one, “don’t you dare to think about it.”
But it
was too late. Rakka had descended to aid his chief.
Rakka
heard coughs of his companions as dust chocked their throats. This relieved
Rakka that they were with him on ground. His eyes burned and turned watery as
flying sand irritated them, blinding the world details for a while. Particles
sting the gashes of his palm.
Curtains
of sand slowly faded and the broken iron-cage came into their sight. Horror
struck them. Tigress was missing.
“Fool of
the wood!” said his elder, “We are without weapons.” Game had changed, tide had
turned. Hunters were now the hunted ones.
They
stood immobile in the haze of dust with no clue to deal with tigress. But still
in their hearts under the shadows of fear, a hope was flickering. A hope that
assured them that they could save their chief. Now with a massive predator
roaming freely, their lives were too at risk.
“Don’t
get panic,” Rakka comforted himself, “Everything will be fine.” He closed his
eyes.
Far from
his past a memory surfaced in his uneasy mind. His grandfather’s hunting
lessons echoed in his ears. A good hunter
is one who sees through his ears too. Your eyes can easily be fooled. Feel the
energy that flows in nature. Sense its every motion. If you are able to do it
then no can save your prey from your spear, son. Your reflexes are the only life-saving
tools in wilderness. The memory sank in his sub-conscious.
Rakka
concentrated on his hearing, trying to perceive every possible sound he could.
Chirping of the little-birds in the nests above, squeaking of squirrels in the nearby
tree-holes and even the subsiding honking of antelopes entered his ears. And
then he heard a soft thump on a wooden plank.
“She is
just right behind us,” Rakka warned others, opening his eyes. Dust had
diminished in atmosphere.
Seven
hunters turned around.
A silhouette
of Neytri materialised near the wooden shards of wagon. Though covered in sand
she still held her majestic charm.
Rakka
didn’t know whether it was his courage or his foolishness that drew his steps
towards the white cat. The only thing he cared was to see his chief alive.
Others
followed him; their eyes locked on the beast.
To their
amazement Neytri didn’t attack them. She simply motioned her head towards the
heap of wooden shards. She groaned.
Rakka
felt his fear vanishing from his heart. She is not a marauder, he thought. “Be
quick with this wreck.”
Without
losing any further moment, under the watch of Neytri, the hunters winched up
the wooden shards. Splinters pierced their hands but they didn’t care. At last,
Asuman’s body emerged blanketed with dust and fragments of woods. Blood oozed
out from numerous wounds. But that didn’t worried hunters. Their chief’s eyes
were closed. He was motionless.
Rakka
embraced his chief. “Say something.”
There was
no reply.
He
slapped lightly on Asuman’s bearded cheek, hoping to get him back to his sense.
But his hope withered.
“Open
your damn eyes! Talk to me! You can’t....” His words receded into sobs. His
vision blurred as tears clouded his eyes.
“Rakka,”
said the elder. He wanted to say more but he could not hide his grief. He only shook his head.
“No! He
can’t die! He can’t...” stammered Rakka. He shook his chief again.
Reality quaked
everyone’s hope as still there was no movement from Asuman’s side. A heavy
sadness enveloped them. They had lost their saviour. They had lost their chief.
For Rakka, he had lost someone who he used to consider as elder brother. He
hugged his dead-chief and wept.
There
rested on the trampled red soil of Baarahmas, the chief of Samudh, Asuman.
•••••
“Butcher
them!” King Aakshraj, the emperor of flourishing Malhar, thundered in the royal
throne room. His ministers and advisors remained silent. They were draped in
white with no hint of jewellery same like their king. Malharians were lamenting
for their loss.
“My Lord,
you are in no condition to make such decision,” advised Amodh, the chief-advisor
and the second-powerful person of Malhar. “You must reconsider your thoughts.”
“Age has
affected your assessment,” rumbled the king, waving his hand. Ale from his
golden goblet escaped and damped his throne. He gave a furious look to a nearby
servant who immediately filled his highness’s empty glass. “They murdered my
son and my men!”
“I
understand your grief but it must not cloud your reasoning.” Amodh’s white
brows frowned. His long nose, brown-eyes on his proud face was bordered by long
flowing silver beard. “And for heaven’s sake stop drinking! Wine won’t fill the
abyss of your loss.”
“No it
doesn’t,” said Aakshraj examining the brim of his glass. The red liquid’s surface
playfully stirred as he stirred the goblet within his grip. “But it helps in
lessening the pain.” With three gulps he emptied the glass.
“Call
back your soldiers. You can’t lunge on mere hunches.”
“Mere
hunches? I may be shattered right now, but, I am not a fool.” He turned to his
servant. “Bring that damn things!”
A servant
appeared from a room with a plate roofed with black cloth and offered it to Amodh.
“What’s
this?”
“You had demanded
evidence. Here are they.”
Amodh
removed the cloth-cover. Twenty darts and a knife with wooden handle lied on
the bronze plate – all stained with dry blood of dead.
“Even a
child knows who uses such darts,” said Aakshraj. “Those savages must repay!”
Amodh
stared at the plate with incredulity. Prakrats had never interfered with outer
world. Those forest people were content in their natural abode. But their darts
were narrating a different tale. Could it
be a Prakrat who killed the prince? If yes, who trained him so well? But why
they wanted to murder the heir of Malhar? And how did that bloody assassin
enter the royal chamber?
“So you
still doubt my decision, uncle,” said the king.
“Just one
question. If they could easily breach our security, kill our twenty men, finds
the royal room and snatch the life out from your son, then why would they leave
their weapons behind? It’s a trap. Someone wants you to wipe away those
Prakrats. Send a messenger and withdraw your troops. Hundreds of innocent lives
are at risk.”
The
throne room filled with murmurs of ministers as they consulted one another
views. Aakshraj found himself lost in
thoughts.
“Wasn’t
our prince blameless?” A man’s voice defied them all like a cold knife.
All eyes
turned to see the speaker while Amodh’s were fixed on king. He was familiar
with that cold voice – Vanshtej, one of the advisor and brother-in-law of King
Aakshraj.
“Wasn’t
he too young to die?” Vanshtej’s voice demanded. He was a skinny man with no
clue of hair on his features, his deep set eyes rolling from Amodh to his king.
The fabric of his black dhoti outlined with golden threads, slapped his
stick-like legs as he paced towards them. “An empire has lost his future king;
people hopes for an action from the king, an immediate decision must be made.”
“A
decision without considering its consequences will only result in bizarre,
Vanshtej. Those Prakrats are guiltless.” Amodh turned towards his king. “Not as
an advisor but as your uncle listen to me. You must stop them.”
“My king,
as per your command our troops had stationed themselves in the plains of south.
Our scouts are exploring Baarahmaas,” Vanshtej informed. “Once their location
is found, I promise that I’ll present you your culprit.”
Amodh had
anticipated this would happen. Words of Vanshtej were dominating Aakshraj’s
mind. He knew he couldn’t win this debate against Vanshtej, the master of
words. “Prakrats are scattered among seven villages in Baarahmaas. You can’t
raid on every village.”
“No we
won’t. Our criminal hides in one of those and I know which one,” said Vanshtej.
“And as far as innocence is concerned, there’s no place of it in a war. A war
only ends with a victory or death. This, they have triggered and now it’ll
conclude with their lives.”
“You know
who killed my son?” asked grief-shaken Aakshraj. “Tell me his name. I’ll behead
him by myself.”
“I don’t
know his name but I am certain who the murderer is.”
“How can
you possibly be so sure about t it?” interrupted Amodh.
“Answer
lies in front of you,” said Vanshtej, pointing his thin hand towards the plate.
“The knife.”
•••••
Asuman felt his body weightless. His wounds were gone and the pain
that weakened him had vanished. A new freshness filled his spirit until random
questions about his surroundings started haunting his mind. He was definitely
sure that the place he was standing wasn’t a part of Baarahmaas.
He found himself alone in the field of wheat that covered the earth
till he could see. His eyes didn’t blink for few moments while he examined the
sky above him. The black canopy was filled with millions of twinkling diamonds.
He even caught a glimpse of a falling star before its long tail faded in
oblivion. “Wow!” As his eyes descended, the sky turned into pinkish-orange above
horizon. A brilliant golden light shimmered and obscured the separation line of
land and the heavens. That golden glare produced an irresistible urge of
belongingness in his soul. Pain, sufferings and grief became a distant memory
for him. Such blissful was the warmth of light. He moved towards the horizon.
Swaying crops didn’t get trampled under his feet but he was astounded to watch
them pass through his body. Then he understood the reason of being so light.
His body was no more a bulk of flesh. Instead his features were now turned into
hazy white.
He suspected some motion in his sides while a light gust of breeze
stirred the crops. Innumerable colourful sparkles sprinkled away from every
grain that thrived on stems. These glitters slowly rose and progressed towards
him. He waited to watch the miraculous phenomenon as countless glistering
particles walled themselves around him, fashioning an enchanting alley towards
the golden glow.
Asuman narrowed his eyes and was amazed to witness his happiest
moments on the shimmering walls. Dancing particles were arranging themselves in
such patterns that they depicted motion-images of his life; memories he had treasured
in his heart. He saw himself as a child enjoying a horse ride on his uncle’s
back whilst his parents were relishing those moments. He immediately bent to
touch his guardians’ feet. When his milky translucent fingers came in contact
with the moving images, it sent a ripple of waves to the whole depiction which
disturbed the entire moment. He instantly withdrew his hand. After a while, glitters
again organised by them but the memory had changed. A teen-aged Asuman was
getting trained in swordsmanship in his Gurukul under the inspection of an aged
man. “Guruji,” whispered the spectator Asuman. He closed his eyes and bowed
down his head to offer his respect. When his head rose and eyes opened, the image
again altered. He watched himself as a young man wandering on the bank of a
river Neytri in Barrahmaas. Then came one of the most precious moments of his
life. He saw her, a beauty that stole his heart, the love of his life. He lost
the track of time while his romantic reminiscences flashed before his eyes. As
air stirred the breeze, the entire fascinating walls fluttered like flags and
the memories woven on it modified. He saw himself with his beloved wife on the
bank of Neytri, caressing theirs infant cute son in his muscular arm.
A bead of tear escaped his eyes and rolled down his cheek. He never
felt the wetness of that precious liquid pearl which amassed the happiness of
his whole life. He kept staring at the images.
A woman’s voice reverberated around the field. “Come back.”
He looked around but failed to find her.
“Listen to me,” said woman’s voice. “For a promise you assured me, you
have to return. You cannot elude. You are bounded with words you gave me. For
sake of your son, for sake of the truth that is kept secret from him, you need
to come back.”
Her words brought a storm in the field.
Strong blasts of air swayed the crops violently and scattered the shining
particles of his memories. He felt nothing. He stood still unaffected by the
power of wild wind. He looked up; the twinkles had disappeared leaving the
black void over him. The golden light of horizon dimmed and finally
extinguished.
He stood all alone in the nerving blackness.
•••••
“Who on earth
identified that bloody knife?” asked troubled Amodh. He was in his regal room’s
balcony, watching the silent capital city of Malhar, Ratanore. To show their
grief for the loss that empire had suffered past night citizens chose to remain
in their house for a day. Ever crowded streets now remained empty in mid-day
and only movements on it could be spotted were of patrolling-guards. The heart
of Malhar forgot to beat that day.
“He is a Prakrat,
my lord,” said Vrat.
Amodh turned to see
Vrat. He was a youth of twenty with black hairs and sharp eyes with colour of
coffee. Though young he out-smarted the knowledge of economics and politics to
any royal advisors. He chose to serve Amodh as an assistant for his own
reasons.
“What does a
Prakrat have a business in Ratanore?”
“That’s exactly an
answer of your question,” replied Vrat. “He was here for his business. He is a
merchant.”
“And how did they
get their hands on him?”
“Those darts were
enough for Vanshtej to send his men to west. Few Prakrat resides in our city
too. It was an easy task for them to find one who knows something about knife,”
said Vrat.
“Where is he now?”
“I don’t know who
he is or his whereabouts. I fear if he is alive or not. Only thing I got from
my whisperers is that last night they stepped inside an inn and came out with a
man. It was impossible to recognise that person, they covered his face. But
when my men asked the manager he could only provide bit of information about
him. He is a merchant Prakrat,” answered Vrat.
Amodh remained
quiet.
“Our soldiers had
never left their homes at night but yesterday they did. They were under the
orders of king,” continued Vrat. “I am shocked to know that you were unaware
about such movements.”
“I was interrogating
the guards of night-watch that time,” Amodh told him, “They hadn’t seen
anyone.”
“Didn’t Vanshtejji mention the place?”
“He bears a mind of
fox. He knew if the location of attack leaks out then I’ll surely develop some
hindrance in his plan.”
“Can’t you extract
it from king?” asked Vrat.
“Vanshtej knows
well his game. He promised the king his son murderer,” said Amodh. Vrat felt
trace of frustration in his words. Amodh continued, “He only needed the permission
that he easily received. Even the king does not have any idea about it.”
“There’s one thing
I forgot to share,” Vrat admitted. “Soldiers also accompanied something like
cages.”
Amodh frowned.
“Cages? Were they empty?” He considered a reason for it and only thing that
came up in his mind was to pen Prakrats.
Vrat shook his
head. “No they weren’t. My men heard howls of beasts from it.”
Amodh pondered over
it and soon answer dawned in his mind. “War-hounds!”
“What are they hatching
up to do?” asked Vrat.
“Only one person
can answer us now,” Amodh responded.
Vrat met his eyes.
“Do you think he’ll share? I doubt it.”
Amodh crossed his
room and opened the sandal-wood door. “He has to open his mouth or I’ll make
sure he won’t speak again.”
•••••
The forgotten pain
returned from every wound that had eroded his flesh. Asuman moaned in agony.
The first thing he saw was Neytri’s hairy face looming over him. Warm breaths
exhaling from her charcoal nostrils succoured his sufferings a little. She
licked him almost cleansing his full face. “Argh! That’s disgusting!” He
growled.
Neytri pawed back,
allowing hunters to welcome back their chief to his consciousness.
There’s no bound of
happiness to Rakka when he heard Asuman’s comment. He silently prayed and thanked
every gods and goddess, known and unknown to him. He embraced his cheif.
“That hurts,
Rakka,” complained Asuman.
“Sorry....I
mean....how can...I thought you are...no but you are alive!”
“He won’t be
anymore if you don’t leave him, you fool!” grunted the old man.
Rakka realised his
mistake and loosened his cuddle, helping Asuman to sit comfortably.
“There’s one thing
we need to do,” said the elder. He examined his comrades. “Aren’t we?”
All nodded in
agreement.
Asuman was
dumbfounded to watch his hunter-brothers surrounding Neytri in a wide circle.
She remained still. They knelt-down before her, their right fist pressing the
earth while their heads down. Asuman was aware about this ritual. It was only
performed to show Prakrat’s new acquainted respect to anyone. And with this
ritual they were now bounded to protect that person with their lives. What
Neytri did was an unsolved mystery to him. Neytri’s thunderous roar revealed her
razor-sharp teeth. Asuman considered it as an acceptance of her honour offered
by his men.
Finally they all
rose.
Rakka with the help
of Simha assisted their cheif to stand and carried him. The party were again on
their path leaded by a free tigress to their home, Samudh.
“So she finally
roared, eh?” asked Asuman, his eyes locked on the graceful walk of Neyti.
“No,” replied
Rakka. “She introduced her roar the first time when you were dead – I mean
unconscious. When we lost hope she came near to you and roared. It was terrifying
at the same moment it was relieving. After few moments you stirred and opened
your eyes. You were correct, chief. She is more than an animal.”
“And that’s the
reason why we bowed before her,” added Simha. “She brought you back.”
Asuman remained
silent. He remembered everything. The everlasting wheat-field, the sky of
stars, the golden light and even every memory on the shimmering walls. He was
positive about the fact that he had heard a woman’s voice not a tigress’s roar.
“Did anyone hear a woman’s voice?”
“Cheif, you need to
rest,” advised Rakka, “there was no woman around. You are exhausted.”
“And he won’t rest until you two fools shut
your mouths,” scolded the old-man from ahead.
“Why he always scolds
us?” asked Simha, getting irritated of being treated like a child from the aged
man.
“Because he is
cracked,” replied Rakka.
“And I heard that
Rakka!”
May be I was imagining things and hearing voices, Asuman thought. He was not certain about one thing - Was I really dead or was it only a dream? If
it was a dream then it was one of the most wonderful dreams he had ever visited
and desired to re-visit it. But what if it wasn’t a dream? If he was dead,
though for few moments, then death is just a next beautiful journey to endure.
•••••
The doors of
Vanshtej’s room opened with fast swing, capturing the attention of occupants as
its wooden elements hit the nearby stone walls.
The moment Ravika,
Vanshtej’s wife, saw Amodh she at once adjusted her veil of pearl-white saree
over her head and bowed.
“Saubhagyavati
bhava,” Amodh blessed her. “May I have few moments of private talk with your
husband?”
Ravika understood
it wasn’t a request, it was an order. She looked at her husband who was busy
with parchments strewn over the central table. As she expected there was no
response from her life-partner. She nodded and left the two political masters
alone.
“I prefer a knock
on the door from my visitors,” mocked Vanshtej. “Such behaviour doesn’t suit to
a person like you, a portrait of wisdom for Malhar.”
“Don’t try to
provoke me, Vanshtej.”
“Aggravating you
will only result in wastage of my time,” said Vanshtej. His words stung like
needles in Amodh’s ears. Somehow Amodh kept his rage at bay.
“What brings you here?”
asked Vanshtej. A mocking grin stretched his lips while he moved towards Amodh.
“Let me guess, you wanted to know the location, and you think you’ll get by
threatening me, isn’t it?”
Temper had
stretched Amodh’s veins. His fists tightened.
“I am so apologetic
to tell you that it won’t work like you want. Instead let’s play a game, a kind
of challenge to you,” Vanshtej told him. “I give you the name. My messengers
will leave the city after an hour. If you think that low-lives Prakarts are
guiltless then stop them before they depart.”
“Give the damn
name!”
“One who preaches
lessons of patience to everyone is how impatient today,” teased Vanshtej. “Tell
me what your subject of interest in those Prakrats is?”
“They are not
matter of concern to you. I had, I am and I will always protect those who
cannot protect themselves.”
“Ah, I see. From
when did such kindness have emerged in your heart? Everyone knows what you did
to your wife, a woman you loved the most. Tell me Amodhji, didn’t you even
hesitate before killing her.”
“Enough!” roared
Amodh. He grabbed Vanshtej’s neck and squeezed it with his strong hands that
once wielded a sword and a shield in many ferocious battles. “Enough with your
tricks and schemes. Provide me the location or I’ll turn this palace into your
tomb.”
“If I die....”
Vanshtej struggled but it was impossible to get away from him, “the
name.....goes....with me.”
Amodh released him
realising the fact.
Vanshtej’s skeleton
body dropped on the floor. He coughed and rolled for few moments. Finally massaging
his neck with his bony fingers, he stood up.
“I am the
chief-advisor of Malhar. The commader-in-chief of army follows my orders,”
announced Amodh. “I’ll send my messenger and withdraw our soldiers.”
“So you didn’t get
the letter?” asked Vanshtej. His voice had now lost the ridicules.
“What letter?”
The devilish grin
emblazoned again on Vanshtej’s face. He went back to his table, picked up an
hourglass and offered a parchment that lied under its weight to Amodh.
“What is it?” Amodh
demanded.
“A decree from our
King Aakshraj that clearly proclaims that you are unfit for your position now
and must be replaced,” stated Vanshtej. “Under your inspection the empire has
suffered its greatest loss.”
Amodh grabbed the
parchment and scanned for any kind of forgery. The broken wax seal of Malhar
was genuine and the sign of king was real. He rolled the parchment and asked,
“Who’s the new one?”
Vanshtej curtsied
and said, “At your service.” He inverted the hourglass that he was holding, the
grains of sand started flowing into the empty bottom vertical bulb. “You are
left with no choice. Time is running out, Amodhji and the hounds are already
out of their cages.”
•••••
Vrat was comparing
notes with one of his men when Amodh entered his room. “My lord, you will be
amazed to hear about the recent discovery in one of our quarries in north.”
“To hell with
stones and rubbish,” blasted Amodh. “Bar every gates of the city. Gather our
men who we can trust and place them on the main gates. Allow no to escape until
I say.”
“But what’s the
matter, my lord?”
“We’ll talk about
it later. Do as I command. We are in shortage of time.”
“Do you know where
they are going to attack?”
Amodh’s gaze fell
on his brilliant assistant. He nodded.
Samudh!
Chandru salute to your imagination. Awesome work. Now what about next chapter ?
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DeleteFound few flaws but the idea of journey to death and the way you depicted is awesome. Have to say only a genius can think like that and the conversation between vanshtej and amodh is too good yaar. Keep writing. Just love the way you write ;)
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DeleteGud work bt i observed thst u re trying to stretch story as much as possible.
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Language used is awsome some more flaws bt overall great work keep it up.
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DeleteI'll make sure the next chapter won't be boring.
@vanshikha
cool down !
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ReplyDeleteI don't agree with the guy above. You did fantastic job and keep the way you are writing. You aren't writing for the world but for yourself. I also admire your imagination.
ReplyDeleteagain thank you for your words.
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